alot of static. it isnt good. buy better recording equipment. and did I mention it isnt any good?
Hmm... didn't hear any static then or now... The guest host didn't have as good of a mic as we did, but that's what happens when you have guests... though his mic wasn't even that bad... hmm....
Thanks for the zero bomb though?
ITS SUCKS, But you have potential!
Fuck garry! Rap about some one that every one knows. It would help you relate to all your listeners. Stop raping yourself and this genre rapping about some one; no one cares about.
Put this advice in there and keep it in mind when you write lyrics:
Focus on the rythm
And balance out your EQ; voice was loud and irratating on some parts.
Go for somthing positive in the song; a counter balance of good and evil.
ha ha ha ha
First off you get one star and only one review coz its made me laugh even tho it is utter garbage. Your mic isnt that good, sounds like your doing it with a very very cheap headset.
Know this, All you need is ten dollars for a decent mic.
You should take my advice
uh oh yea!
Well, this was done with no sound effects whatsoever and in one single take.
I've got a new mic on order, so that should clear it up - we're not talking a cheap $10 one, we're talking one of the better ones, that I'll be happy to use to produce finer quality submissions. I'm looking forward to the Xmas break, because I'll be submitting audio that will blow your 'music' out of the water.
nice beat. belongs in a rave.
you try using vocal disortion and make it sound cool coz ur voice is monotone and it just isnt that good. Also add MORE to the musical aspect. ITS VERY WEAK.
Well i apologize that i'm not upbeat while doing a tragic topical about a boy's life being ruined and pushing him to suicide....go listen to more mainstream...let me guess you think soulja boy and lil wayne are the most lyrical because they have good voices? GTFO
its really bad when you not only sample the music but rip off of other sampled music. Sounds like H2o and other legit I heard. Try making this again and try being more original with more variety in your work.
Never heard that track buddy all my own work cuting and sampling until i was happy with it.
Cheers for your thoughts
Predictable,Repetitive and Annoying.
Its a rather odd song..You repeated the same nearly identicle riffs to 1.30..
Even then when you changed the riffs you rushed it.You changed out of key too fast.
It just sounds like you pasted another song into this one and cut out the original.Same thing with the solo.It came out of nowhere.Overall the song was boring and too predictable.
''Go to the review request club if you want more reviews.''
Will work on everything you said dude.
Thanks for the review.
The beat is extremely slow and you only get to hear two instruments.It lacks complexity as well as entertainment value.
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